Cynthia ryland wrote a simple realistic story named “checkouts”, this short storu talks about the intense situation between 2 teenagers that fell in love. The idea of this story is actually good because its a simple life situation put into a interesting plot, but i felt that the plot of the strory was really slow and nothing interesting really happened.
As you can see after Reading the story the characters and the situation are realistic. For example a girl with red hair that just moved from another city and “meets” a booy at a grocery store and then fell atracted to eacj other can actually happen in our real life. Also the fact that she gets really shy around the boy she likes, for example she never said hi to him neither did him even though they had the oportunity.
The fact that the characters never talked to each other even though they see one another, makes the plot of the story slow and the story beging to get boring and monocromatic, and kills the exitment of what you think would happen which is that they would meet, instead they end up forgeting about each other.
I think that this a good story with not a very good ending, the realism of the story i basiclly the only characteristic that pokes out. Other tha that I just think the climax and the plot are very flat, nothin ever happens. So I wpuldnt say that its an awesome story that i enjoyes Reading even though it had some good things the story was boring.
As you can see after Reading the story the characters and the situation are realistic. For example a girl with red hair that just moved from another city and “meets” a booy at a grocery store and then fell atracted to eacj other can actually happen in our real life. Also the fact that she gets really shy around the boy she likes, for example she never said hi to him neither did him even though they had the oportunity.
The fact that the characters never talked to each other even though they see one another, makes the plot of the story slow and the story beging to get boring and monocromatic, and kills the exitment of what you think would happen which is that they would meet, instead they end up forgeting about each other.
I think that this a good story with not a very good ending, the realism of the story i basiclly the only characteristic that pokes out. Other tha that I just think the climax and the plot are very flat, nothin ever happens. So I wpuldnt say that its an awesome story that i enjoyes Reading even though it had some good things the story was boring.